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Temptation

Was there time to say no
A time to stop myself
From what I did
Was there—
Ever any Time or Person
To stop me…
I sigh knowing I have no solution
No,
I feel as though there never was
--
Something, someone to save me
I look down as the blood grows colder and colder
Like the blood in my heart… wasn’t cold already
Look another wound here another cut there
Nobody really cares
So the cuts, grow deeper and Deeper
Yes! The blood it’s flowing now out my body
More I want, I scream inside crying
I keep up not stopping—Deeper and Deeper
…until
I hit the floor
My breath in gasp
The blood cold
Like my heart
Like my soul
As I go numb
I realize
Nothing more…can harm me,
As I lay there nobody comes…
Nobody helps
Nobody ever cared

Alone I lay forever
©2008-2009 ~John9982
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Author's Comments

This poem amazed me a little bit it's very stright forward on my part and after reading it I sat there like...whoa I wrote that

I hope you all feel the same way

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:iconwhitefangkiba:
seeing somthing like this come from you is really werid, but I like it alot it was very deep, great job

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who is howling with the wolves but isn't one of them, shouldn't be surprised if he gets bit...
:iconjohn9982:
I know...it's not like me thats why I said whoa...lol but don't worry I don't do any of this

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Rolling Ninja truck of DOOM!!!
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|__-~=*(Ninja)*=~-__| |||'""|''"\____,
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It Will sneak up on you :ninja:
:iconwhitefangkiba:
good <.< if you where I'd kick your ass cause you no do that X3 bawhahaha and it's not just whoa it Whoa! X3

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who is howling with the wolves but isn't one of them, shouldn't be surprised if he gets bit...
:iconfrightdelight:
wow i can relate to how you feel. My friend was in the same situation

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~:heart:~ R.I.P james,Branna,Mike,and Taylor. i luv you all! ~:heart:~
:iconkadeling-xs:
Some days I know what you mean but others its like "Say whaa?!"

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If Tomorrow Was My Last Day With You...
How Would You Tell Me Good-Bye?

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